It took me a few hours, but here it is, ready to be ripped apart. Once again, any feedback is appreciated.
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June 19th, 2006 | school
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June 19th, 2006 | school
It took me a few hours, but here it is, ready to be ripped apart. Once again, any feedback is appreciated.
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Your first sentence was passive tense and nonsensical:
“The technology industry is ever changing, and so are the people that run, and are involved in it. ”
I’ll read it later.
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